Essence of BloodLust

wow that was kind of cool! i like th whole differnet side to edward and everything but i was a little confused. was this supposed to fit in to the ...

great job! i love how you descibed everything in detail like what she was wearing and so forth. You also did good on portraying the charaters. So much so, that ...

Beautiful! I love the descriptions. This was a very good tale and it kind of reminds me somewhat of a preface to a story. It's great on its own but ...

What?? Where's the rest??? I Loveeeeeddd It! That is such a cool twist to red riding hood! I totally didn't see that coming. I love it when people take old ...

I Think it's great! I can kind of understand where you are coming from. I can't really judge it though because to me songs are like poems, and you never ...

Hey! I think you have a great story plot but it would be better if you would maybe add in a chapter before, kinda like a preface, or maybe do ...

Great story going. You really catch the readers attention with your questions that address them in particular. I wont comment about spelling/grammar because mine is dreadful. Lol But as far ...

Great story going and dont give up because of what people are saying. My grammar and spelling are so bad! i had to delete one of my stories because this ...

OKay, I Love the whole plot of this and think that your wording was great. Some of your grammar may be a bit off but dont worry because every reveiw ...

I think that you put alot of thought and effort into this and that you have great talent. I enjoyed it but like others have said, the lyrics in my ...

That was absolutely wonderful! I felt like it was really straight out of a Ouran novel! And the story plot involving the thunderstorm and Tamaki's need to protect her no ...